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Post by adolpha on Feb 12, 2007 16:53:41 GMT -5
Kohaku wandered teh forest,looking 4 a pool of water teh drink from.She limped along and stopped,howling and waiting for teh reply of another wolf teh help her.Her leg continued teh bleed from a bite wound and laid down,licking her wound, awaiting a response.
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Post by Tei on Feb 13, 2007 14:32:40 GMT -5
((okay, first off, please spell out words. For instead of 4. And try to make sure your posts are gramatically correst. Teh=the. I've made that mistake before, so don;t worry. Add some description to the territory as well.))
Cloud let out a yawn, the leaves from the trees shading his bright golden pelt. A light breeze played with his fur, leaving him with a fine feeling on his skin. Blue eyes were staring straight ahead of him, ears in their position but not searching for sounds. Today was strictly a relaxing day for the male. At least, that was what he had hoped. A howl lit up the air, sending him into full alert mode. Nose went into immedate action, searching the wind for whoever might be the cause of such a sound. Blood was on the wind. Blood and a female.
He was up in a split second. Paws worked the ground as Cloud followed that scent. It wasn't one he was used to, that was for sure. An unknown wolfess with the scent of blood. As the scent grew stronger he slowed his pace down. Then his eyes caught sight of her, laying on the ground tending to her wound. Cloud paused in his step, not exactly hidden, yet not out in the open either. He stood and watched, waiting and wondering.
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Post by adolpha on Feb 13, 2007 15:16:02 GMT -5
Kohaku smelled a scent but pretended to ignore it while she continued licking her leg. She scanned the forest with her eyes for any sight of a wolf.
(thinking)'Whoevers here isnt familar teh me,I better watch'
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Post by Tei on Feb 14, 2007 21:29:44 GMT -5
((Add more description. The taste on ehr tongue. the sounds around her. ow did she catch the scent?))
His blue eyes stayed locked on the female in front of him, fur on end and all muscles tense and ready for any attack. It would be a bad day for the female should she decide that Cloud was an enemy. He wasn't about to hold back, not for an inured female. He had been taught against such things. And he wasn't about to go against that. The golden male shifted slighty, circling her laying form.
"Who are you?" he finally asked, stepping out so she could see him, but at the same tine keeping his distance. Head was lowered so his neck wasn't exposed, tail out straight behind him. These threes weren't his lands and he doubted that they belonged to this female, but one could never be entuirely sure.
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Post by adolpha on Feb 16, 2007 9:06:44 GMT -5
Kohaku lifted her head looking at the male with curiousity."Im Kohaku,who are you?"
A slight breeze rippled the trees and there was a deep silence as Kohaku laid there observing this wolf.The smell of roses roamed the area as Kohaku stood up and stood there relaxed but ready if this male became a threat to her.
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Post by Tei on Feb 17, 2007 13:55:46 GMT -5
((Good. try not to start your posts with Kohaku's name everytime. Add the description on the territory first. Also, maybe try adding what Kohaku feels or is thinking. Like what did she think of Cloud when he came forward. Did he surprise her?))
To tell this female his name or not. It wouldn't hurt him or the pack if she knew. After all, this female, Kohaku, had given him her name without a stutter. "...Cloud." If she knew his brother, thn this might be interesting. His tail flicked in a thinking manner. Sitting his rump down on the ground, Cloud made sure to watch what this female would do. She could have been injured but that didn't mean the female was not a threat.
"Why are you here?" It was a demanded answer. Cloud's ears turned backwards, slightly wondering what was behind him and if anyone was trying to sneak up behind him. It was a habit for the Inferno Fate wolf.
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Post by adolpha on Feb 18, 2007 18:24:59 GMT -5
The forest was quiet as the two stared at eachother.Kohaku tilted her head sideways,a habit of hers when she was curious about something,and said "Some wolves attacked me,so I came to wherever here is so I could get away." She watched his ears turn backwards as a small rustling noise was heard behind him. 'Whose there I wonder' it doesnt sound really wolf like,Kohaku's ears moved back as a rustling sound was heard behind her. Ignoring it she moved her ears back to normal position and looked at Cloud again.
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